- Joined
- Dec 1, 2021
- Messages
- 53,418
- Reaction score
- 87,127
my favorite one i think was about overcoming drug addiction. I forgot what the name of it was, but it was so good. Its probably a few months old
You like the personal ones... voyeur lol.
my favorite one i think was about overcoming drug addiction. I forgot what the name of it was, but it was so good. Its probably a few months old
Your recent one called Spark was pretty good too.The one about the butterflies.Its about love i think sirYou like the personal ones... voyeur lol.
Your recent one called Spark was pretty good too.The one about the butterflies.Its about love i think sir
Sure go for it. You can start one off with the themeYou should write one with me in a PM... I'll do a paragraph and then you do one until we feel like its done.
Whatcha think?
Sure go for it. You can start one off with the theme
Maybe we can do one about Max and his amazing courage too
I sent you a PM.We can definitely do one about Max.
Id like to see where your brain goes with the first one.
I sent you a PM.
Pretty new to the poems thing, i just tried to find a theme and some words that rhymes sir
Lmaothanks for tagging me big bro. Beautiful
I was anxious though at first reading the thread title. Thought this was about someone @Poirierfan and I know lmao.
You're most welcome sirI enjoyed it, thanks.
My good buddy @StonedLemur has inspired me to post a little poem of my own. I was going to post it as a thread but making a thread is a massive pain in the balls these days (building on this fear of uncertainty around change)
Inertia
Be like water, go with the flow they say,
But if I can't step in the same river twice maybe I'd rather not step.
Nah, I'd rather be the stone. Solid, unmoving, unchanging.
They'll say I need to be rolling, can't be gathering moss
But where I am is just fine, the moss is barely up to my knees
I'll be the one stone you leave unturned, my past, present, future set in stone
You'll be without sin if you don't cast me and just leave me be.
Because the rolling stone will be the first to fall off the cliff,
Chipped against the potholes of the road of life.
A rut is safe, familiar... dull?
That first step could be the start of a journey of a thousand miles
That's a long fucking way
But maybe when I'm stone cold dead, and the only stone left is a headstone
Do I want these regrets? These could haves and maybes
These risks left unrisked?
Perhaps a won't be a leap, more of a shuffle.
But perhaps this stone will shed a bit of the moss.
Perhaps we'll put a toe in that river, see what it's like.
You make me sound far too badass with that one!God damn sir, that was fuckin dope.
"A rut is safe, familiar....dull?"
That line has been true many times in my life, whether it was a job, a relationship...drugs...women.
HITS HARD
Fuck, that line hits hard...took me off guard, put and pointed the finger at me... underneath all these rocks and leaves.
Hit me right in the chest like your rolling stone...left me bruised, and all alone.
All alone with my thoughts, but who thought it meant nothing?...not me.
You have a way with words...and expression...Aunshi the professor droppin another lesson.
Listen up class...the man came to speak, and didn't come to depress you or make you feel bleak.
He came to awaken you...from your awful slumber...watch your ass when Aunshi is around...that mothafucka has your number.
~SL
You make me sound far too badass with that one!
It's one of those things where we all hit these decision points in life and sometimes it can feel like staying where you are is safer but that's a decision itself. I've got a few of those to make myself in the next few months and don't want to be that mossy stone.
But if you can kill two birds in a bush with one stone is it better than a bird in the hand with no stone?
(there's a lot of stone idioms)